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• CharlieRomeoLima on 2017-08-21 03:49:27 (UTC)

  Eve, this was the sexiest, most beautifully-written chapter yet. Your dexterous use of phrasing and perfect timing of moments within moments rendered the prose as buoyant as the cloud nine upon which Alex was floating in these 40 minutes of literary bliss. There are only so many ways to say the word 'pleasure', but even with its frequent occurrence in this chapter I never get the sense that it is overused. I say, pile it on thickly with even more pleasure; and damn, three intense orgasms just with his tongue! And that wall-fuck was the cherry on top - from your erotic audios e.g. the Mardi Gras beads one, I know exactly how sizzling that gets!! I also noted your skill as a writer in how you smoothly slipped in that comic intermission with the hypothetical Viking baby named Björn aka Ikea 🙃, without disrupting the chapter's overall hot and steamy mood.

  I really felt for Alex, her quiet, almost desperate determination to stave off and keep at bay the inevitable return of the icy, standoffish Daniel Briggs persona, stalking like a wolf in the shadows right at the very edge of the firelight. And I think we get our best look yet at the tender, caring, and vulnerable side of Erik. I can't help but imagine this side of him as this innocent farmboy. 😋

  • A Eve on 2017-08-21 19:48:28 (UTC)

    haha I love the image you chose for Björn - except she's a girl! :P

    And yes, there's a bit of the boyishness of Westley in Erik at times - Alex has to have a reason to love him, after all :p

    Thank you so much for the lovely words, it makes me feel all gooey inside 💋

    • CharlieRomeoLima on 2017-08-22 03:10:25 (UTC)

      And, as you know well, all things with gooey-marshmallowy centres are just begging to be 🌸squeeeeeeezed!🌸

• Lux on 2016-08-12 15:44:00 (UTC)

  I usually try to have some kind of eloquence in my comments, but just... DAMN.

  • A Eve on 2016-08-14 18:18:19 (UTC)

    haha that's good enough for me :D

• cubastank on 2016-06-23 00:10:03 (UTC)

  My gods, the oral has to be the hottest thing you've written thus far! Of course, the whole chapter was white-hot as well! It might be tough to top this, but I'm looking forward to the rest all the same!

  • A Eve on 2016-06-24 08:45:27 (UTC)

    Thank you! I'm so glad to hear it! :D

• MadWithLust on 2016-06-19 13:53:53 (UTC)

  I guessed 3...but the chapter was 40 minutes... (not complaining, I'm so glad you didn't split this one into parts!!!) :P

  Fuck, the way you just describe her clothes coming off, that moment when she is bare and naked...absolutely comfortable with the loving she is going to get...mmmph! And then that lovely oral and then against the wall!

  This would be the perfect love scene except...the only thing missing is that "bell"...only a few more chapters left... :( She's gotta have more bell! :P

  • A Eve on 2016-06-21 21:36:35 (UTC)

    haha oh I know, that damn bell...

    just wait...do you honestly think he can hold out forever?

• STEVE4EVE on 2016-06-19 02:06:38 (UTC)

  It was enlightening to hear the woman's perspective on these deeply passionate moments...memories of similar times took me into another dimension of entering a woman's body with my mind, feeling her feelings, being fully present to her every sensation...

• YouAreMySunshine on 2016-06-18 18:23:46 (UTC)

  3 orgasms and then going against the wall....that's yellow-hot!
  The Kiss would have made it white-hot!
  I let your voice take over my imagination, and then you take me places every goddamn time Eve!

  • A Eve on 2016-06-18 20:44:09 (UTC)

    Haha thank you! ❤️

• Jandrusel on 2016-06-18 10:13:59 (UTC)

  Cheezus Christ Eve, I'm gonna need a cold shower after this one. But alas, loved every second of it 😍

  • A Eve on 2016-06-18 11:52:27 (UTC)

    haha thank you! 😘