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• CharlieRomeoLima on 2017-08-02 04:41:16 (UTC)

  Holy shit have we hit paydirt BIG TIME in this chapter, Eve! I've read quite a few erotic scripts but this is on a whole other level; I can say without reservation that this is the hottest passage of text I have ever heard (even without the sucky fucky), and this isn't even halfway through! You will of course understand if I turn out to repeat this like a broken record in the chapters to come! As several have already said, you've uncanny insight into the workings of a man's mind through the all phases of the sexual crescendo. And regarding your accuracy in the physical sense, Erik's experience is how my favourites among your erotic audios make me feel close to approaching, especially the lengthier 30+ minute ones where it's such a pleasurable ordeal to resist coming too early! 😱

  You've done some extensive research on the military angle of this chapter. Basic Underwater Demolition training! I read about that long ago when I played military FPS shooters but what I still remember is the 'surf torture' where candidates lie face-up on the beach with their heads pointed toward the incoming waves, arms linked. They never know when they will be waterboarded and the point is not only to test your ability to resist the primal urge to break and flee, but to rely on and protect your teammates. You will not wash out further to sea if unit cohesion is maintained.

  In this chapter it's great to finally see Erik brought down to a level of humanity with which we your listeners can identify, his military training and superhuman augmentations notwithstanding; not even this mighty warrior's stubborn nature can deny a cock-worship session in the grand tradition of Eve! 😅❤️ The story's really heating up...I don't think I can avoid binge-listening for much longer. :P

  • A Eve on 2017-08-02 18:39:27 (UTC) (edited)

    Thank you Charlie! I'm so glad I got at least some of the male psyche right, I just tried to imagine how difficult it must be sometimes to control that natural urge.

    I did a lot of research into the SEAL training program, I had debated making Erik's unit a SEAL unit early on. But there are so many books featuring them, I wanted to give the Rangers some love - and, no, it's not because of Lundqvist though I do love that man!

    I hope you enjoy the rest of it, and thank you again 💋

• billymacorbuddy on 2017-01-06 21:24:42 (UTC)

  Forgive me, I haven't written a book report in quite some time (and certainly never on a book like this). But I'll summon some skills from high school because I think there is a theme here that shouldn't be over looked.

  The element of seduction between these two is trust. And they are seducing each other, they have been all along. Physically, but emotionally as well. Alex uses her body to seduce his, but she's really seducing his heart. And she's using trust to do it. This woman knows almost everything about Erik, down to his most intimate medical detail. Every flaw and blemish is plain for her to see. He knows this, yet she wants him anyway. He gives into her because he trusts her. He wants her body, yes, but she has his heart. Because of trust.

  Erik is using trust in the same way. A few chapters ago, back in the woods, there was a powerful moment. Alex was having trouble getting down from the tree when Erik reaches out and says, "Don't worry, I got you." He's asking her to give up control and trust in him that she'd be okay. We see it again in this chapter. Alex's scar from getting shot, her flaw, is laid bare before him. He doesn't recoil, he's not disgusted. His actions are telling her to trust him. They're bonding during their love making, not because of their physical lust, but because of the trust that they have in each other.

  This works so well because isn't that what we're all looking for? Someone we can trust absolutely with both our body and soul? Someone, that despite all our obvious flaws, loves us and wants us anyway?

• cubastank on 2016-06-18 02:31:14 (UTC)

  A little late to the party, but I just started listening to the series about a couple of weeks ago and have enjoyed every installment up to this point. This chapter was especially lovely. Is it wrong to say that I was actually picturing me and my girlfriend having sex with your descriptions? With the two of us so far apart (she's in California and I'm in Michigan, but we have met twice so far), I feel this was helpful in easing the loneliness with the long distance. Your words have really been outstanding not just in this chapter, but in the previous chapters as well, and I look forward to the remainder of the series. <3

  • A Eve on 2016-06-18 08:47:21 (UTC)

    Aw, that is so lovely! Thank you, that's exactly what stories like this are for, to help stir the imagination and ease some loneliness ❤️

    • cubastank on 2016-06-19 00:14:30 (UTC)

      You certainly do an excellent job! I just had to listen to this chapter again. <3

      • A Eve on 2016-06-19 13:40:31 (UTC)

        Thank you! There's a lot more where this came from :D

• STEVE4EVE on 2016-04-19 01:45:38 (UTC)

  SEAL training:
  SURRENDERING
  EVERYTHING to
  ALEXANDRA'S
  LUSTFUL LOVE!
  

  • A Eve on 2016-06-18 08:46:32 (UTC)

    haha awesome!

• MadWithLust on 2016-04-19 00:02:48 (UTC)

  I can see why this is your favourite chapter! A little cock worship went a long way!!! :P

  And I can't believe there finally is a romance novel where the guy isn't Studly McThrustin and pounding her into endlessly into orgasm with no problem whatsoever. I don't know how you do it but you describe a truly horny man's sexual experience so well...he wants to be a good lover and make sure she cums but damn it, it takes everything out of him just to hold back cause she feels so fucking amazing and any little thing sets off that hair trigger and makes him cum.

  And I can't figure out where you will take this next! :D

  • A Eve on 2016-04-19 11:36:53 (UTC)

    Aw, that's so good to hear! I guess I just pay attention :P

• • A Eve on 2016-04-16 11:28:34 (UTC)

    Thank you! I'm so glad you liked it ❤️

• Null on 2016-04-13 13:51:18 (UTC)

  When you said this was going to be "pretty hot", you were underselling it. Holy mother of god this was one of the hottest things I've heard!

  • A Eve on 2016-04-13 19:48:44 (UTC)

    Awesome, thank you!

• YouAreMySunshine on 2016-04-11 20:11:26 (UTC)

  OMFG....The Feels!! *o*
  You just took me on a ride with this one.
  I was eagerly waiting for the chapter where Eric (or Erik *Swedish* ) gives into her....and Voilà!!
  I just closed my eyes right from the beginning and followed your voice and when the chapter ended, I was lost, I'd escaped from reality.
  Great job Eve! ❤

  • A Eve on 2016-04-12 13:33:24 (UTC)

    Aww, thank you! SO much more to come ❤️

    • YouAreMySunshine on 2016-04-12 19:05:33 (UTC)

      Yeah, so much more to cum....oops, slip of tongue....no wait, rather slip of term!!
      Ohk! I suck at puns. :|
      I'll be waiting fr the next chapter :)

      • A Eve on 2016-04-13 19:48:55 (UTC)

        Aw, thank you!