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• MadWithLust on 2025-04-11 11:59:33 (UTC)

  And here i thought would be the real "happy ending" (if you know what I mean), but then you threw in that curveball! I never would have guessed that intro would go there!

  I can't believe you snuck so many good surprises and tied up so many loose ends! What an ending! It was done so well but I can't help but want more...I'll have to fill in some "important details" fanfic style of what happened on some long nights between Chapter 39 and 40 and maybe right after the ending...and maybe after a few weeks after some settling in... :P

  And what an amazingly accurate insight into intricate inner workings of the male mind! Bazongas! :P

  And the tease of a Paige and Callum story swoon

  • A Eve on 2025-04-15 14:32:48 (UTC)

    The ending didn't include on-page sex (although you know what they got up to after he brought her upstairs) because it's actually thematic. Their relationship started with intense physicality, and so the book ends with a deeper, more intense emotionality. They've progressed, and so has the story, and hopefully, the reader. It was a strategic choice, one that I thought would be ultimately. more satisfying. I'm glad you liked it! And P&C are coming soon!

• wearerobin on 2025-04-10 03:47:49 (UTC)

  Okay, so I said a lot in my ch39 review, but I want to comment on the ending. You my friend, NAILED it! What a satisfying conclusion. I literally have no notes. Noah’s confession was perfect. Kate’s realization that marriage & love is not just something one just checks off a list. Her investing in herself & her business & encouraging Noah to do the same and go for his dreams was PERFECTION. Seeing the Agathas and Arthurs together one last time, CHEF'S KISS. Paige and Calum teases for their own story, AMAZING. One last scene with Lily being embarrassing, PRICELESS, and of course Noah and Kate marriage proposal, absolute CINENMA! My heart fluttered every time they declared their love for each other. And all the pet names? Noah calling Kate, “my love” “honey”, Kate referring to him as her “boyfriend” it was PERFECTION. And though I wish we had more time with these two being an official couple, I’m deeply satisfied with where you left them. Hopelessly in love and ready for their future.

  • wearerobin on 2025-04-10 03:55:23 (UTC)

    You are so talented. I can’t wait to see what you do next. So many stories fumble the ending, but you hit it out of the park. I’m in awe of your talent as a writer and voice actress. Girl you really did the damn thing. This needs to be published immediately. I would say make it into a tv show, but honestly, I don't think you're voice performance can be topped. No one can portray these characters the way you did. Fantastic work. Bridgerton the books and/or the show ain't got shit on you! All the girlies on BookTok need to read this when the time comes. And I'll do my part spreading the word. Thank you so much for sharing this story with us, thank you for the time spent writing and recording it. It was well worth the weight and exceeded my expectations in every way. My heart is so filled with love for Noah and Kate, my new OTP. I cannot WAIT for Calum and Paige's story! But take your time, & take a break you earned it! I'll be here when you're ready. Thanks again for sharing. Cheers!

    • A Eve on 2025-04-15 14:28:23 (UTC)

      WOW! What a FANTASTIC review!! I'm so thrilled you liked the ending - I don't think you guys know the pressure I felt leading up to these two chapters. It has to be good! I kept telling myself. What if they hate it? I'm over the moon to find out it hit the mark!

      I'll be starting on Paige and Callum very soon, it's a good idea to stay in the writing zone even when you finish a novel. Momentum, and all that.

• cmwilliams1958 on 2025-04-08 22:44:38 (UTC)

  Well, thank goodness I'm no longer hanging off a cliff for the end of this story!

  You'll have to update everyone with some tidbits about these characters when you continue with Paige and Callum's story.

  As I mentioned in an Anonymous comment at Literotica, I look forward to buying this ebook at Amazon and perhaps the audio book at audible.com.

  You're a gifted writer and an even more gifted narrator; I'm glad I "discovered" you and your work on Literotica.

  CMW

  • A Eve on 2025-04-15 14:26:28 (UTC)

    Thank you so much, that's so kind of you to say! I will definitely be including Noah and Kate in Paige and Callum's story, I'm not ready to say goodbye to them yet either!