Chapter Twenty Six - Noah & Kate (my new erotic romance novel)

22:09 Noah and Kate Oct 16, 2022 7 comments 681 170

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Noah wakes up from his double shift feeling like a bag of bones, and his partner Emma discovers who he's been texting...


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  • wearerobin on 2022-10-31 05:10:28 (UTC)

    Okay, this is gonna be a series of comments, cause I have A LOT to say about Noah & Kate. I'm a fan of your audios but recently I went on a trip to Greece and decided to check out Noah & Kate. I never listened to your fiction b4, so I thought I'd give it a go. And my friend I fell in LOVE with this story and these characters. I listened to all 26 chapters, at various points during my trip. I listened to the first few chapters on the plane (bon the way there and on the flight back) in between watching movies and sleeping.

    I listened to a few chapters as a laid out on the various beaches we visited.

    I just had the best time following this wonderful love story and these wonderful characters. So thank you so much for sharing this wonderful story with us.

    I really hope you publish this story, because it puts other romance novels to shame. Nicholas Sparks ain't got shit on you. This could be a movie or even a Netflix series.

    Excellent work all around my friend.

    • wearerobin on 2022-10-31 05:19:59 (UTC)

      Okay, on to the chapter review. I might go back and review my favorite chapters. But let's start with 26. Emma kinda rubbed me the wrong way here. I know she was spitting facts to Noah about his "situationship" with Kate, and she did make several points. But at the same time, I kinda wanted her to mind her own business and let Noah sext with Kate in peace.

      Nothing she said was wrong though, but it annoyed me for some reason. Maybe it's cause we haven't spent that much time with her. Or maybe it's cause she dated Callum and I'm a Callum & Paige stan so I just don't like her based on that fact and that fact only lol. I'll admit I'm biased.

      I hope Kate isn't too in her head about Noah not texting back. Dang it Emma why did you have to interfere? Noah and Kate were being cute, and your two cents (though completely valid) were not needed.

      Can't wait for the next chapter. Maybe Noah and Kate will finally have sex in a bed! And he can go down on her like he wanted to in chapter 15!

  • Aadam on 2022-10-17 16:55:11 (UTC)

    I've never disliked Noah as I have in this chapter. I still can't believe how dense (per his own words) he continues to be. Many times I found myself screaming mentally at him snap out of it! and punching him in the gut. Other times, the name of a fictitious horse, named Arfur Foulkesaycke came to mind. I kept renaming him Arfur Foulkesaycke Noah and I don't know why. And to top it all off, he didn't respond to Kate's last message. He was all tied up in knots when she took her time to respond to him. Another fictional horse name came to mind and thought to myself Whale oil beef hooked Noah! And how do you suppose she'll feel when you don't get back to her, you arse?

    My heart goes out to Kate as I think she will get hurt in the short term, regardless of how this story will end. 1/2

    • Aadam on 2022-10-17 17:06:34 (UTC) (edited)

      Here I was just thinking to myself that the worst of this roller-coaster ride was behind us, that the story was coming to its natural end, and that it would be plain sailing from here onwards to the epilogue. Silly me. I can hear you saying Oh, my sweet summer child, what do you know of storytelling? I always keep an emotional wrench ready to throw at my narratives, my little listener.

      I didn’t expect this turn of events, but I welcome it. It means there’s more to tell and more time to enjoy your voice and the ups and downs of this story. Keep the chapters coming and please do not rush to finish this book. Take the story wherever it needs to go, even if it means Kate might get momentarily hurt. This novel feels so organic I would hate to have a contrived element or a Deus ex machina ruin it. Cheers! 2/2

      P.S.: I was shocked to see this posted yesterday after reading the news that you have Covid. Please get some rest and get well soon.

      • A Eve on 2022-10-24 09:46:00 (UTC)

        Thanks so much, and I love your comments. The point of books like these is to present flawed characters that have to grow and change, so I'm just letting you see Noah's flaws :P

  • MadWithLust on 2022-10-17 10:55:48 (UTC) (edited)

    This was an interesting chapter...I wasn't expecting this turn of events to happen there!

    Emma is such an unknown...I know she meant to be innocent but I was annoyed at her rude grab. But she wasn't wrong about that and the way it hit Noah in the feels...it hit me in the feels too! It can't end "strange"...Kate's gotta be the one but how are they going to make it work???

    After that, I wanted to not like Emma but I sort of imagined this was TV or movies where she was good looking like everyone on the cast. So I was totally thrown off and surprised when she just blurted out that question!!! It's like, "well, yeah, but Kate, so no"...but still curious about her experience that time it didn't work out... ¯\(ツ)

    Almost forgot, I feel bad about that cliffhanger end of the chapter...what's Kate ffeeling??? I mean he totally should have mentioned she won twice in a row, unless it's a different category like "best make love ever" :P

    P.S. I absolutely love the opening part of the chapter! I've never heard anything close to how this was written in words to capture how tough it is to crawl out of bed!

    And I hope you're feeling better!

    • A Eve on 2022-10-24 09:46:23 (UTC)

      I am, thanks MWL. I'm glad this chapter hit you that way, that was the intention :P