Stay With Me : A Novel by Eve Elliot - Chapter 9 - part one

27:59 Stay With Me: A Novel episode 10 / 31 (part 1 of 2) Mar 04, 2016 17 comments 1304 359

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Finally....finally Alex and Erik go to bed....

In the book version, this a long chapter divided into two parts - the first being from her point of view, and the second from his. This is a common technique in romance fiction, so that you get to feel what both of them are experiencing without the amateur-writer mistake of jumping in and out of their heads in the same scene.

So because it was quite long, I recorded this in two parts. This is just part one, the sex :D - but please listen to part two as well

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  • STEVE4EVE on 2016-04-15 23:11:41 (UTC)

    I'd punch Eric on the nose for treating Alex like that, he'd.... No, Eric...Sorry!...I didn't mean it...Put me down!...LOL!

    But, should be worried...Alex has as good as got you by the balls now. She knows everything you've been trying to hide from her.

    • A Eve on 2016-04-16 11:29:35 (UTC)


      that she does!

  • ChristopherPi on 2016-03-13 09:20:15 (UTC)

    As much as I hate to say it but never mind the sex! - what about her heart? There is only so much rejection and unfulfilled longing that a heart can take before it finally crumples and shatters into a thousand aching shards. Alex may have the memory of one passionless and cruel fuck from the man she loves with all her heart, but that memory will destroy her. :'-( The next chapter is awaited with bated breath.

    • A Eve on 2016-03-13 09:45:50 (UTC)

      Oh you're just the kind of reader/listener I love :D

      Don't worry, this book is all about their hearts. It just takes a few ups and downs to get there. ❤️

      • ChristopherPi on 2016-03-14 12:41:30 (UTC)

        A few ups and downs! That is like saying Tenzing and Hillary's trek was a walk down Las Vegas's main road. And how Erik is going to live with himself knowing how he treated Alex...!? Oh the suspense, the emotional pain, the yearning....

        • A Eve on 2016-03-14 20:39:01 (UTC)

          Well I just posted part two, where you get to experience what Erik went through after her left her...

          • ChristopherPi on 2016-03-15 11:11:51 (UTC)

            There does not seem to be comments enabled for part two. Not that part two assuaged anything.... there seems to be so much emotional damage that the listeners, oops I mean the characters could break, before the next chapter.
            [The last past of the chapter may be slightly ambiguous as it seems to go from after his encounter with Alex, to either jumping backwards to Erik planning to take Alex, or that Eric intending to do it again. The context would lend itself that he is dwelling over his previous 'brilliant' thought to finally dissuade Alex, but there does not seem to be a clear identifier as to Erik's last thought patterns being pre or post Alex's mounting. (Or more likely I just missed it when my tears got too much ;-) ]
            Thank you.

            • Null on 2016-03-16 13:07:35 (UTC) (edited)

              Part 2 definitely took place after part 1. Erik referred to 'it' a few times, even mentioning that making it rough on Alex was basically a last-ditch effort at trying to make her hate him.

              Part 2 of chapter 9 is so far my favorite. Amazing work, Eve. Can't wait for the next chapter!

              • A Eve on 2016-03-16 19:21:37 (UTC)

                Thank you so much 💋

  • MadWithLust on 2016-03-06 17:50:07 (UTC)

    Oh, you are so full of surprises! I was not expecting it to happen like this! So many teases! I was totally expecting some Eve cock worship as she got to her knees...

    I thought it would be eerily detached and almost monotonous but the way he took her was so fucking hot! That position, face down ass up...the thought of her hiking up her robe...OMG! And of course, I had"follow along" with the story and that raw, primal fucking, combined with those gentle words, was amazing! Except for the left me wanting more! I mean, for Alexandra... :D

    • A Eve on 2016-03-06 20:56:20 (UTC)

      Well, don't worry - she gets it good :D

  • FallenKnight71 on 2016-03-06 06:20:54 (UTC)

    Okay Eve I am running out of curse words to call you *grins* I just don't think I have the patience to listen to your romance novels one chapter at a time lol. I hope you take this as the compliment it is you lovely woman you:) As always I can't wait to hear the next one:)

    • A Eve on 2016-03-06 20:56:04 (UTC)

      aww, thank you! Go ahead, curse me all you like!

  • JJJ on 2016-03-05 18:35:18 (UTC)

    I really hope that wasn't the end of the story... if anything this chapter made me feel a little uneasy, especially considering how good the build up has been so far.

    • A Eve on 2016-03-05 18:47:01 (UTC)

      No, it's by no means the end of the story. This is a whole novel, and as I said, there are ups and downs.

      Originally, this chapter had a whole other second half that shows you more about what he's thinking- but I just couldn't perform any more at the time. And it would have made the chapter an hour long!

      So hang in there - Erik does come to his senses :D

      • JJJ on 2016-03-05 18:59:36 (UTC)

        Thanks! I'll eagerly await more chapters.
        I just feel bad about stories where one party goes 'home' unfulfilled - I guess that's my weakness, hehe.

        • A Eve on 2016-03-06 20:56:45 (UTC)

          she doesn't go 'without' for long, don't worry :D