Stay With Me : A Novel by Eve Elliot - Chapter 20

45:38 Stay With Me: A Novel episode 21 / 31 Aug 11, 2016 12 comments 792 307

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This is another long chapter (sorry!), with a lot going on.

The more Erik learns about Alex's past, the more upset he seems to get...


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  • CharlieRomeoLima on 2017-09-25 20:50:02 (UTC)

    Eve, I understand, and you have even said so yourself, that you've deliberately set this story up as a rollercoaster of ups and downs. But even knowing that I am sooo damned frustrated with Erik's great lummoxedness right now I can't even properly express it! (Your writing in this chapter is just brilliant to evoke this kind of visceral emotional response!)

    Maybe it's the video games I've played over the years but I can't help but see you setting up this Paul Haggarty as the Big Bad that they will have to overcome together near the end. I imagine this murderously-obsessed piece of human refuse finding Alex even in their remote mountain fastness and staging a full-blown siege with helicopters and a platoon of crack mercs he hired using those connections of his Alex mentioned him having.

    Haha, but this is an erotic romance, and in these fictions the powers of wild, lusty sex and healing, all-encompassing love overcomes all obstacles!

    • A Eve on 2017-10-01 18:58:47 (UTC)

      haha it's great hearing you imagine what might come next...

  • MadWithLust on 2016-08-24 11:05:36 (UTC)

    WTF?!?!? I didn't expect anything like that! Such a terrible, dark secret to have to carry and it just made me so mad (not with lust)!

    I can't believe your story is getting me so worked up (in both the sexy and not sexy senses)! :P

    • A Eve on 2016-08-25 12:47:16 (UTC)

      haha that's the whole idea, MWL! Authors are really just emotion-manipulators, didn't you know? :P

      Don't worry, it all works out. I don't mind giving away that there's a happy ending :D

      • MadWithLust on 2016-08-26 00:53:38 (UTC)

        No fair! Even when I know it's going to work out in the end, in the story, I'm still caught up in the tension! It needs an eruption of release! :P

        • A Eve on 2016-08-27 21:24:17 (UTC)

          oh it's coming (behave) :P

  • Null on 2016-08-23 20:24:21 (UTC)

    Aww yeah, another long chapter! And holy shit, Erik was maaaaad! Can't wait to see what this leads to.

    • A Eve on 2016-08-23 21:46:18 (UTC)

      :D thank you! New chapter in a few days ❤️

  • YouAreMySunshine on 2016-08-13 20:22:57 (UTC)

    Well, the sad part, Alex had a rough past!
    The positive result, Erik is letting out his emotions and getting emotionally involved with Alex!!
    One more thing, Paul stinks more than the combined fart of a million skunks!

    • A Eve on 2016-08-14 18:15:23 (UTC)

      haha I love that!

      Thank you!

  • Jandrusel on 2016-08-12 20:51:32 (UTC) (edited)

    Gosh! I know that they're gonna end up together, but my God, the plot thickens so much and the journey is so hard. I suffer for these two. I was just screaming in my room: 'JUST KISS, YOU NUMBNUTS. YOU BOTH KNOW YOU CAN'T GET ENOUGH OF EACH OTHER'

    Solid effort, Eve. But damn, this is getting complícated.

    • A Eve on 2016-08-14 18:15:35 (UTC)

      oh hell yeah...