Lost in You - Erotic Poetry Written and Performed by Eve

02:58 erotic freeverse Mar 25, 2024 14 comments 759 164

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I wrote this poem to try to describe how erotic audio made me feel when I first began to listen to it. But listening to this again, I realize this could also be a reaction to a lover's recorded message. Maybe it's time to encourage people to make erotic audio for each other!

I lost myself in you today…

standing on a swaying carriage

trying not to brush up against strangers

pushing my earbuds in deeper

to drown out the relentless hum and whine

of metal scraping on metal,

facing my own pale reflection

in the clouded glass doors,

staring at magic-marker grafitti

and the cold grey tunnel walls

streaking past.

You spoke, and I don’t remember

whether it was a greeting

or a command,

if it was friendly,

or urgent with need

but just the sound of your voice

made me close my eyes

and let my head fall back

waiting, with a shiver of anticipation

for your next words.

You sounded so comfortable,

so far away from here

lying in bed, maybe

a languid, drowsy quality to your voice

and in an instant I was there

feeling your hand lazily drift

along my thigh, and up

and up

and up…

while you told me

how I make you feel.

That tinge of desire in your voice,

that ache,

that need to touch and feel

to kiss and taste

to hold and guide

to fuck and be fucked

to take and be taken

to writhe and buck

and come undone…

I could hear it all

whispering to me,

pleading with me

begging me to release you

from this torment of lust

that binds us both.

As you touched yourself

I could hear it in your breath

in the pauses and catches

between words

in the small sounds

you probably don’t even know you make.

And as you let your thoughts tumble

freely from your lips

while you brought yourself closer,

as you climbed towards that peak

panting out your pleasure

your mind alive

with images of us,

hard and fast and almost


as your voice climaxed

along with your body

and you cried out in pleasure

letting me hear it ripped from you

almost against your will,

I braced my hand against the glass

so as not to touch myself

biting my lip in exquisite agony

my brow pinched

my eyes squeezed shut

my breath leaving me on a long

slow, jagged gust.

I swayed, gently

along with the carriage

and I was utterly, blissfully alone,

lost in that moment

in you.


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  • Chicane on 2024-05-21 11:05:32 (UTC)

    This is just lovely. Like a pendulum it swings between free and more structured, between abstract and explicit. It reminds me of Howl in these ways and the last dozen lines are particularly good. I'm just scratching the surface of all you have here, but I so appreciate your passion for language and this particular range of uses it can be bent to. Better than some others, to be sure.

    • A Eve on 2024-05-21 21:59:14 (UTC)

      Thank you so much! I love writing, I'm thinking of putting out a book of erotic freeverse.

  • Kissesnhugz on 2024-04-13 14:00:38 (UTC)

    Maybe for a moment,...,we should talk face to face for a change,,to see eacgothers eyes just a few seconds. Cuz for the while weve known eachother its been like forever without seeing your reaction when you realise I am giving you full attention at that very moment. Sorry its been short but life is calling me again please take care of your loved ones and never stop writing... youre a master at your art... we l9ve you

    • A Eve on 2024-05-03 12:51:31 (UTC)

      Thank you so much!

  • MadWithLust on 2024-04-09 12:27:16 (UTC)

    Mmm...so many gorgeous details wrapped up in a poem! It is such a beautiful scene to imagine you all hot and flustered, aching for release... And it's also quite fun to imagine what happens next, a hot shower, maybe long bath, or just diving into bed naked with more audios? swoon

    And the first rule of Erotic Audio Love Club is...don't listen if you're not ready to cum! It's a "mistake" I'm sure plenty of people make...I myself had plenty of "unexpected cleanups" when I first started listening to your audios! :P

    • A Eve on 2024-05-03 12:51:20 (UTC)

      haha the first rule of Erotic Audio Love Club... I love it

  • stigmatamartyr on 2024-04-06 01:16:12 (UTC)

    What wonderful images this poem involves in my mind.. it brought me to tears

    • A Eve on 2024-04-06 20:51:56 (UTC)

      Oh my! That's so wonderful to hear, thank you! xx

  • CheckpointCharlie on 2024-03-26 18:37:45 (UTC)

    What a wonderful poem! I've been thinking about making erotic audios again, since I haven't recorded anything in almost a year. And, you know? I think this poem is a very good boost. I might try again one day.

    Thank you for these beautiful posts, Eve! ❤️

    • A Eve on 2024-04-06 20:52:26 (UTC)

      You're so welcome Charlie! I hope you do make erotic audio again - you could even record this poem if you wanted to!

      • CheckpointCharlie on 2024-04-06 22:54:57 (UTC)

        You know what? I might actually do just that!

        • A Eve on 2024-05-03 12:50:58 (UTC)

          You should!

  • Car54whereartthou on 2024-03-26 02:34:46 (UTC)

    What a treat today / tonight! I wasn't able to listen until later, so the anticipation was palpable...and so worth the wait! I know I am compelled to tell you how much I enjoy these verses every time you post a new composition. And I love that the table could so easily be turned with this one and still carry the same intensity, the same heat, the escalation of wanton desire that becomes, like a runaway train, unstoppable for both, two lovers, alone, together!!! I don't know if the symbolism of the listener's setting was intentional, but it worked incredibly well...❤️‍🔥

    • A Eve on 2024-04-06 20:53:00 (UTC)

      You got me, the symbolism was intentional (I can't help myself!). Thanks for listening! xx