How Do You Want Me? Erotic short story: female surrender & incredible sex

22:35 Short Story Apr 03, 2015 5 comments 34809 5390

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Some of you know that I am a writer by profession - so I decided to write an erotic short story about a woman surrendering to her lover's wishes, and how he amply rewards her trust!

Passionate, erotic, graphic and full of lush description, I think you'll enjoy this audio very much! Please let me know what you think!


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  • Vermouth1991 on 2018-06-11 04:03:09 (UTC) (edited)

    Oh Eve, this is one of your best audio fantasies. Definitely my favourite "narration" one (as opposed to "script" ones where there is full dialogue) of yours. I keep coming back to this, especially the climax part, where it could just as easily work on its own as a Finisher. '"Come!" he growled, his voice almost breaking. "Now! Come all over my cock and scream for me before I pump you full of cum!"' HOLY FUCK THAT IS SO HOT. 😱 I can easily picture the both of them spasming and sweating and gushing over one another, overcome by list and love and the whole world disappearing for them except for each other. And the delivery of that line was SUPERB, Eve! You still sound like yourself but there is an undeniable masculine quality to it, I can just as easily imagine some male GWA performers saying that and losing control over their fantasy girl. Especially the way you groaned out that "Now", as if the guy was begging the girl to cum so that he could have permission to orgasm and shoot his creamy load inside her. As with many great fantasies, the dominating one eventually surrenders to their own lust and the one on their knees or on all fours gains their own control despite submission.

  • MadWithLust on 2015-05-21 10:24:07 (UTC)

    Sigh, you've done it again! Taken a fantasy of mine and made it better than I imagined! The gift of a lover's complete trust is so intimate and loving and I've always fantasized about rewarding her trust just like this! Kissing and caressing every inch of her, showing her how much I love her body...

    But then you go and overwhelm me with that beautiful oral scene! Her hips up in the air, the though of licking her until *I* can't take it...it was so achingly hot! And then there's the surprising sensual assplay. The thought of her enjoying the sample of the forbidden pleasure, it made me as lusty as the man in the story! Desperate to just cum inside!

    And then there's the loving afterglow...unh! Such a sweet little treat! I did enjoy this story very much so you can tell me a bedtime story any time! ;P

    • A Eve on 2015-05-21 15:05:45 (UTC)

      thanks so much! I would like to record more of my own erotic literature and books - you think they would be a welcome addition?

      • MadWithLust on 2015-05-22 00:39:16 (UTC)

        (sarcasm) Oh, I don't know...I think you'd better ask Eve about that...she might not approve of your sex-positive erotic literature. It's not like it's her forte; she hasn't taught a class on Erotic Literature, you know? Besides, it's not like there would be thousands of listens to that sort of thing...(/sarcasm) :P

        On a more serious note, not being in the actual story gives you quite the freedom to tell so much more. I do always love the way you make your audios so engaging and immersive, but you know I love your way with words too. So to hear you tell it like a story, to let you describe everything without having to resort to out-of-place dialogue, it's different in a good way! So, yes, your creative art is always a welcome addition to my playlist! :D

  • cuddle_with_me on 2015-04-04 00:50:13 (UTC)

    This was absolutely, completely, incredibly amazing. You're a hell of a writer and a hell of a performer. Amply rewarded indeed!